- Clear, convincing and tightly focussed. This is at its best when discussing Winter's Bone; I think your arguments about the spectator's relationship with NCFOM could benefit from some development.
- A good piece of writing nonetheless, but like you last essay it could be even better in a second version...
- Band 5
- Clear, convincing and tightly focussed. This is at its best when discussing Winter's Bone; I think your arguments about the spectator's relationship with NCFOM could benefit from some development.
- A good piece of writing nonetheless, but like you last essay it could be even better in a second version...